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Image size
4896x3264px 7.2 MB
Make
FUJIFILM
Model
X-M1
Shutter Speed
1/146 second
Aperture
F/6.4
Focal Length
101 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Jun 28, 2015, 4:17:08 PM
Sensor Size
23mm
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Overall Vision
Originality Technique ImpactSo first, I really love how cheerful this picture is. You've done a great job at giving off a very summery and happy feel. I love when photographs play into my mood and feelings as a viewer. Great focus- the main focal point is centered in the middle mostly and was easy for my eyes to find. As far as improvement goes, I just have a couple of suggestions. This is a very typical image (flowers/nature), so it's important to make the everything about it crisp so that it stands out. The colors are a little too distracting because they are a bit oversaturated. I absolutely LOVE how the red polka dots are in the background (that's super fun!) but the flowers in focus have just a little too vibrant of colors. Toning down the saturation a bit would greatly improve the quality of this picture. And, one other thing, you could try shooting from a different POV to get a little more creative of a perspective. Like perhaps having the main focal point to the side or corner of the picture. You have some really great elements to this image though! Keep up the great work! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="
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